New user onboarding copy

One idea on the first screen,
permission copy at full strength.

A new user gives you a few minutes. We restructure the first-screen claim, step hints, empty states, and permission explanations so each screen says one thing and each step has a visible result. Features, prices, free quotas, and support channels stay yours to fill, and data use is written as it actually is.

One idea per screenEmpty states actNo softened permissions
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Paste onboarding copy

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Review the result

Your result will appear here

We separate the first screen, steps, empty states, and permission copy, add the missing next action, and flag the product facts you must confirm.

SAMPLE OUTPUT

Here is exactly what you receive.

This is the complete output for the source text in the demo above: an onboarding clarity score, itemised reasoning, the items to check against real product behaviour, and the restructured copy. It is a demonstration, not a customer case.

SAMPLE

Restructure result (sample)

Onboarding clarity score88/100
+50
01

Replace the welcome with a one-line positioning

“Powerful and easy to use, manage everything effortlessly” carries no information. It becomes “helps [TARGET USER] do [ONE SPECIFIC JOB]”.

02

Give the empty state a next step

“No data yet, please check back later” stops the user where they stand. It now says where to click, what to prepare, and when the result appears.

03

Rewrite the permission request

“For a better experience” never says what is accessed. It becomes the data category, the specific purpose, whether it leaves the device, and what breaks on refusal.

Restructured copy
# First screen

[PRODUCT] helps [TARGET USER] do [ONE SPECIFIC JOB].

# Steps

1. Import [OBJECT]: afterwards you will see [VISIBLE RESULT].
2. Choose [SETTING]: the system processes it by [RULE].

# Empty state

No [OBJECT] yet. Click New to create the first one — you will need [INFORMATION] and it takes about [TIME].

# Permission

We need access to your [DATA CATEGORY] for [SPECIFIC PURPOSE]. The data [LEAVES THE DEVICE OR NOT]. If you decline, [AFFECTED FEATURE] will not work and everything else is unaffected.

**To confirm**: feature scope, required information, processing time, whether data is uploaded, and the support channel — all from what the product actually does.

WHAT IT DOES

New users do not need encouragement. They need the next step.

01

One idea on the first screen

What it does and who it is for, in two sentences. Add a second claim and neither one survives.

02

Empty states must instruct

“No data yet” is a full stop, not onboarding. Add “click New to create your first [OBJECT], about [TIME]”.

03

Permissions state three things

What is accessed, what it is used for, and what happens if access is denied — never vague experience improvement.

WHY IT IS WORTH DOING

The first five minutes decide whether they return.

01

A first screen nobody recalls is wasted

Users do not read it twice. Two claims side by side usually means neither lands.

02

Invented features surface in minutes

A capability or free quota that does not exist is found on the first click, and costs far more trust than leaving a gap.

03

Vague permission copy is a liability

Writing data use as “improving your experience” is expensive to explain once users learn what actually happens.

Note: how onboarding copy performs depends on the product shape and the audience; there is no general research result for an optimal onboarding flow. This site works at the text level only, and gives no legal or privacy compliance advice.

RESTRUCTURE DEMO

The same onboarding copy, two ways of writing it.

Before

Welcome to our product! It is powerful and easy to use, and helps you manage everything effortlessly. Please grant access to your files so we can provide you with a better experience. No data yet, please check back later.

Restructured
# First screen

[PRODUCT] helps [TARGET USER] do [ONE SPECIFIC JOB].

# Steps

1. Import [OBJECT]: afterwards you will see [VISIBLE RESULT].
2. Choose [SETTING]: the system processes it by [RULE].

# Empty state

No [OBJECT] yet. Click New to create the first one — you will need [INFORMATION] and it takes about [TIME].

# Permission

We need access to your [DATA CATEGORY] for [SPECIFIC PURPOSE]. The data [LEAVES THE DEVICE OR NOT]. If you decline, [AFFECTED FEATURE] will not work and everything else is unaffected.

**To confirm**: feature scope, required information, processing time, whether data is uploaded, and the support channel — all from what the product actually does.

Demo sample: a generic welcome becomes a one-line positioning, the empty state gains a next action, and the permission request names the data and its purpose plus what happens on refusal. Paste your copy to get your version (sign-in required; one credit per run).

WHY YOU CAN TRUST IT

We put “no invented features” into our product principles.

Features and quotas stay blank

Features, integrations, prices, free quotas, and export formats become [TO CONFIRM] slots rather than plausible capabilities.

Permission copy is not softened

What is accessed, what for, and what happens on refusal are all stated, never replaced by “for a better experience”.

Empty states always carry an action

A state with no next step is rewritten to say where to click and what the user will see afterwards.

Content is not stored

Submitted text is used for this single AI request and is not intentionally persisted. See the Privacy Policy.

FAQ

Ask these before you pay.

Will you fill in missing feature descriptions?

No. Features, integrations, prices, and free quotas are product facts. This site leaves a [TO CONFIRM] slot for you to complete from real capability.

Can you soften the permission wording?

No. We state the data use and the consequence of declining as they are, and we do not trade them for a vague “improving your experience”.

Can you design the onboarding flow?

No. We restructure the copy text. No flowcharts, no wireframes, no interface code.

What does one run cost?

One credit per run, usually done in seconds, returning the draft, the reasoning, and items to check.

Do credits expire?

No. Credits never expire — whatever you do not use carries over to the next cycle instead of resetting.

Is there batch processing or an API?

Not yet. Each run processes one document and consumes one credit; there is no bulk upload or API today. Email us with your use case and we will assess it.

Is my content stored?

Not intentionally. Text is used for this single AI request only. See the Privacy Policy.

Which copy fits?

Post-signup first screens, onboarding steps, empty state text, permission requests — anything a new user reads in their first few minutes.

SIMPLE PRICING

Prove the value before you upgrade.

Starter

$9/ month

For an occasional publishing cadence, with a focused monthly credit allocation.

  • 50 optimization credits per monthly renewal
  • Complete GEO analysis
  • Chinese and English output
  • Markdown export

Pro

Recommended$29/ month

For frequent publishers who iterate on content continuously.

  • 250 optimization credits per monthly renewal
  • Complete GEO analysis
  • Chinese and English output
  • Markdown export

Advanced

$79/ month

Our largest monthly credit allocation, for the heaviest continuous usage.

  • 1,000 optimization credits per monthly renewal
  • Complete GEO analysis
  • Chinese and English output
  • Markdown export
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